Mhmm thought at the end i still couldn't quit portrait Adam, to me he seems kinda like an emo, but with short brown hair. He looks plain to the human eye, but his charm is his clumsyness wich makes him look cute...and not short but tall, althought smaller then Joe

srry 4 the En

This is story is great i completly loved it. I always get this urge to read a great story in one day, but unfortunately i have other things to do then read all day long:s I'm really glad i chose to read this story it's simply amazing. Your really good at this, you portrait what he feels so well:D

This story is amazing, absolutely amazing. I was so excited I just grabbed my mom and made her sit there as I explained how amazing this story was.

This story is intense! Its awesome and I can't stop!

This story is fascinating! Your writing style really grabs you and drags you in, and Adam is a crack up. Its nice to read about someone who isn't amazingly perfect, but instead has problems and Issues To Deal With.

amazing...my heart's almost in my throat. a bit confusing, but adam's such an endearing mess, and i love how the plot was so tightly-woven. and you really convinced me with the ocd thing! click. click. click. hehe...

This is really good :)

hi zeb.

i just have to say that i love you. because you're fiction if one of very few.
it has an actual story line for starters, that is unique and quirky and unexpected.
it has deep and flawed characters that you can actually imagine walking down the street.
you have a story line that makes people gasp because they ACTUALLY WEREN'T EXPECTING IT TO HAPPEN!!
also, your stories aren't sex obsessed. i don't mind them, but it is so refreshing to read a story that doesn't have horny, whiny, prefect looking main characters.
i know that your story does have some plot holes and some loose ends. but i love it anyway.
good luck finding some of that elusive spare time to polish off this amazing story, because i really think it deserves it.

So, are we or are we not having a sequel? I've got to say, this is by far one of the best slash stories I've enjoyed. It's like watching a movie - gotta admit, though, the actor that took Joe's place looks a bit too asian to fit in. But oh well - let's just blame it on my recent obsession with korean dramas.

GOD RAN OUT OF PEANUTS!
8D
LMFAO

oh my gawd this story was so amazing. Perfectly done. XDD

I just read this story from start to finish, and I thought I'd just let you know how much I enjoyed it, even though you finished it ages ago. Reading something on fictionpress in one go isn't something I do everyday.
I don't usually read slash (in fact I don't think I've ever finished one before) but your writing totally drew me in (as did the wonderfully flawed characters)
It was a fabulous concept, excellently executed.
You have a great writing voice, everything flows very well. Very rarely was I jerked out of the illusion that these characters were real. Often when I read things I can't help myself picking apart the writing, the characters, the plot, but that was kept to a bare minimium here.
I'm little reluctant to tell you that I found it a little predictable, in case it taints what really is a glowing review. Sometimes a little predictability is just what you need, a safety net if you will.
You never had me rolling my eyes going, well I saw that one coming, because I enjoyed the ride much too much to care.

I hope this gives you some warm fuzzies because I think you deserve it :) Who doesn't want warm fuzzy feelings?

Thanks

this story is great. your other stories are amazing too but this one i like because of the humor, the utter cuteness of Adam, and supernatural stuff, and the slow romance. cool. it works. you sound like you feel a little shaky with this and we can get into the nitty-gritty but the overall feel of the story is great.

Amazing story with a brilliantly created character. Adam is by far the most interesting person I have never met. I admit I have a certain weakness for emotionally instable characters and the OCD bits along with the can't look anyone in the eye bits just make me love him even more. *sigh*

I don't know if you're still considering turning this into a series or not but if you are, then I think you should know I would most definitely read it. All in all, it was such a joy to read, thank you for sharing. :)

this was absolutely amazing. i really enjoyed it and place it up there with the greats. kudos ^ infinity!