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| Vampireko.olz 2008-05-20 ch 2, | abuseI'm loving your vocabulary and grammar. That was what brought my attention. That, and your unusual title. Please update. When you get a chance, i would like you to read my story and tell me what you think. -_- -M.J.L. |
| Aki to Tarou 2007-05-16 ch 2, | abuseIt seems Andy isn't too sad about his new life, heck I'd be happy if I had a hugeass room and MY OWN BATHROOM too. (Sei had to share a bathroom with four other sibs growing up D:, the horror, the horror... -_-) This chapter was more discriptive, I like how you wrote small details of the surroundings, gives the reader life of what he sees. It was also too short! lol, certainly setting it up for the third chapter. Keep it up! I think I'm going to have to reread Musical Tattoo as well to refresh my memory :3. ~Sei. |
| Aki to Tarou 2007-05-15 ch 1, | abuseAww, you dedicated it to me D:. ;-; *ish touched* Oh no! The unescapable angst! I dunno why, but a good story always has that part in it ^^. I like your title, it's very fitting- and it almost sounds like it's a double entendre? Composing Ink, as in, in the midst of writing a story? Or maybe I'm thinking too much into it >_>. Hmm.. still quite a mystery to Andy's past. Adopted I see- were his other sibs younger or older than him? I guess I'll find out. Collaborative work! :o Tristan, get your own account too! x3 Keep up the good work~! ~Sei. |