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| CrystallizedRose 2008-05-09 ch 27,  | abuseLovely story Bomee! Poor Mina, having her heart beaten like a pinata. I NEED to see what the ending is. Good luck on rewriting this and getting it published. I'll be sure to but a copy and recommend it to my friends. Keep me posted? email: socrystalclear at yahoo dot com P.S. Oh, if you ever make a dating sim out of this, you'd better make Jaiden as hot as I pictured him! xD Best of luck, Crystal |
| alison :) 2008-05-05 ch 27, anon. | abuseoh my gosh! please please please send me a copy of this story. it's SO GOOD! my email is accs_alison at hotmail dot com thanks! |
| Yuri119 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. :) |
| kww 2008-05-04 ch 26, anon. | abusesend updatte? littlemizkrissee at aol dot com |
| monica ^u^ 2008-05-03 ch 27, anon. | abuseaaww... I really loved this story. Still loving it. ^u^ My email is: mochachocorize at gmail dot com Good luck! I'll totally buy your book! :D |
| shiraz 2008-04-28 ch 2, | abusethis is so funny and lovely i lurve it beyond reason! XoXo Shiraz! |
| AzhureSky 2008-04-27 ch 27, anon. | abusehi!! what i can say is the story is so imaginative and well made-I cant help but fall in love with Jaiden(though he was really a brat like me!!) for i can imagine his gorgeous face and violet eyes staring back at me-like i would also melt into puddle with eyes like that. I also love Mina-though she seems so clumsy and hardheaded-she has a real personality and i can feel that the characters were alive qnd demonstrates full-blast emotions-I hate the D>I>M girls-typical to rich,snobbish,and self centered girls-(Paris Hilton and Nicole Ritchie alike..)though there was slight mistakes in spellings but it was really fun reading this-i hope this would be made available in Paperbacks and local bookstores. Please add me at my and msg me if you have new and upcoming novels.. MAID FOR ME is great!! |
| shadowgirl618 2008-04-23 ch 27, anon. | abuseHey! Let me know if you have books/stories published/posted! My email is broken.wings7 at gmail dot com. Thanks. shad |
| Kracie 2008-04-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseT_T wah!! omfg, i love this story! actually, i liked] all of your stories! kracie519 at live dot com |
| a beginner 2008-04-22 ch 27, | abusethats AW F U L L, sighs and cries linta_sama at yahoo dot com im totally sad... thats not fair |
| Daughter of water 2008-04-19 ch 27, anon. | abuseWell i cant wait for the whole thing yahh please keep me updates green_envy_jas at hotmail dot com |
| mm 2008-04-19 ch 27, anon. | abuseI'm sorry to hear this... well please keep me updated though marylopez247 at yahoo dot com |
| Deathandlove 2008-04-19 ch 27, | abuseohh...I really wanted to finish it... heres my email bandgeek89 at cox dot net |
| Mini-san 2008-04-19 ch 27, anon. | abuseOmg I love your stories.And I rlly wanted to finish it.Anyways I guess I will add my email... frozen.angel.tears at gmail dot com |
| Nicola 2008-04-19 ch 27, anon. | abuseI really enjoy your stories and would love to carry on reading them. My email is: nikgirl2 at hotmail dot com |