why is the story i bought so different from this one?

so it's $11.00 dollars? can you buy it any were else?

I really enjoyed reading Maid for Me even though it wasn't complete on fictionpress.
Good luck selling your book [:
You are a very talented writer who is able to give depth to the characters, something not many writers have been able to do lately. I hope you will continue writing because you are amazing at it.

Keep it up!
And may you forever be successful.

-Crystal

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What else will go wrong now?

O: what does Jaiden feel for Anna?

They are so cute together! [:

Emi disgusts me. So does Aaron.

They should take advantage of Aaron being a smoker and make him run all around the court.

Does Mina know how to play tennis??

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Wow, you're amazing at writng.

Good job with the chapter (:
I don't like Emi D:

O: she loves Jaiden?

You're a very talented writer [:
Keep it up!

Which girl will Mina find for Aaron? :O

I liked this chapter [: