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Reviews For: It's not fair
a silenced revolution
2007-05-09
ch 1, 		abuseNice rhymes and rhythm. Great job.
BellonaFlayreRiver
2007-05-09
ch 1, 		abusei know how this is, ive sung this song before. the repitition of "its not fair" worked very well and you used it to its full potential. the last line is a great punch. lovely.
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