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| nycgurl9014 2008-08-10 ch 19,  | abuseaww i hope this story isnt over cuz it hasnt been updated in a while |
| via 2008-03-03 ch 19, anon. | abuseAugh! I cant believe you cut it off right there! I really want Ashley to wind up with Kaleb though. I've always kinda had a thing for vampires. =D Anyways please update soon!! |
| AMM3485 2008-02-22 ch 19, | abuseI LOVE THIS STORY, Go Kaleb! |
| MeLove 2008-01-21 ch 19, | abuseThat's horrible! My vote has been Peter all the way. PETER PETER PETER PETER PETER PETER PETER PETER Good enough?? Lol. |
| hades.daemon 2007-12-19 ch 19, | abusei love this! i am defiinitely a peter-fan! this is so damn awesome! |
| femmevampire 2007-12-07 ch 19, | abusei'm shock but it is true about the sex thing...keep writing signed vampira chica |
| FM Radio 2007-12-01 ch 19, | abuseHorrible woman. KALEB SUPPORTER ALL THE WAY! THROUGH AND THROUGH! Make it a dream, sort of. Make Peter have imagined it was Kaleb who raped him. Kaleb left after threatening him, someone else came, and they took kaleb's place, and Peter was so out of it that he couln't tell. |
| The.Archer 2007-11-30 ch 19, | abusethis is so good! probably seeing as i'm a peter fan though. it definitely was a twist, and i'm dying to see what he has to see. update soon! your laoyal fan, innocence |
| INUGIRL 2007-11-30 ch 19, | abuseupdate soon, I'm interested to see where you go with this. |
| EbonyANDIvory 2007-11-30 ch 3, | abuseOh wow! You are such an awsome writer! But just a note... If Kaleb is a Vampyre, then he shouldn't be able to see himself in the mirror would he...? Hehe, just kidding, i have a vampyre characer who whould DIE if he couldn't look in a mirrio to fix his hair every thiry seconds XD Great begining anyway! FAR |
| laprincesadelasuisa 2007-11-30 ch 19, | abuseWow. Way to update... what an exciting chapter... I really do not like Kaleb... I want Peter to be out for blood. Keep up the good work. Hope to read more soon. |
| dancingflame315 2007-11-26 ch 15, | abuseplus ashley should be with peter cuz what she feels for him is real . .. not some vampire trance. boo kaleb |
| dancingflame315 2007-11-26 ch 14, | abusedude. PETER all the way. kaleb gives me the creeps most of the time. i dont like the way he talks and he only lusts for ashley. go peter! |
| Sandra Fowke 2007-10-27 ch 18, | abuseI've just read this from the start and I love it! Please update again soon :) |
| Moi Fah 2007-09-17 ch 18, anon. | abuseDO it! Do It! DO IT! Sorry, a little enthusiastic, nyah? Well, anywhoo, it was a nice chapter, though a little on the short side. I suppose it shouldn't matter as long as the point gets across and nothing is getting too dragged out! Love ya! -MoMo-chan a.k.a. Moi Fah a.k.a. Plum Flower |