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Remedy For Love
2007-05-13
ch 1,
abuseWowzers. Where do I begin?
Let's talk about his eyes and you knack
for sucking people in with your details.

I am in awe of your talents.
I myself, have a love for grey eyes-
but you just doubled that love with your
detailed descriptions and specific attention
to the different emotions behind the eyes.
I love it.

This is a great beginning too.
I-can't-wait for the rest-that means hurry up ;)
Rin
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