|Reviews for Dissapointment|
| Basara 5/17/07 . chapter 1
am i big a? huh? grammatical error?
| angel953 5/11/07 . chapter 1
Your poetry certaintly does not dissapoint me. This was great. I think in your first line you forgot the word "as". If i am not mistaken you were writing a haiku because the lines count out that way...except for the first. Great job as always!
| a silenced revolution 5/11/07 . chapter 1
You're right, it's definitely not fair. Great haiku, I hope things get better.
| Ashelin 5/10/07 . chapter 1
Some more very true words. It is not fair. I hope things work out. Great job.