I'm intimidated...in awe.I don't know what to say.It's so beautifully written.

I love this poem. It has a lot of depth.

that is so cool! i love creepy stuff like this! its vaguely reminiscent (did i spell that right? ah!) of Alfred Lord Tennyson's "The Charge of The Light Brigade:" creepy, haunting, and AWESOME!

krystelvampire

Nice poem. It would be interesting to peer into someone's else mind. I think if someone peered into my mind they would find a hampster on a wheel.

~SirScott