Great story!

Very manga/anime-ish. In the second chapter, was there a mention of Death Note? And I swear there was a Bleach one...

I digress, nice story. Update soon.

~Cookie

Dun dun dun! Suspense! Oh and I really like Ayumi! She's so cute >

Aww cute ^^!Ilove this story, it's so interesting!

I really like this, too bad it hasn't gotten alot of reviews yet. Keep writing!
~Aile~