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| Me 2008-07-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseTesting |
| Markus Ripley 2007-07-15 ch 1,  | abuseInteresting story, update soon. I like the description, and yes, I know everyone says from the time we are in primary "work on the description" and there are WAY better words to describe it, like, voice, or... description... Well I can't think of any, but good work, none the less (is that one word, or three?) ripley ps - I too ADORE smallville, I am egerly awaiting the new season. |
| EvangelineGoth 2007-06-25 ch 1, | abuseNice, please update soon! |
| Raven of Ice 2007-05-31 ch 1, | abuseoh...sounds interesting. Updatin soon? |
| Klyne 2007-05-11 ch 1, | abuseI feel that it is unhealthy to read everything you write, since I get so attached to the characters. However, the summary caught my attention and then the prologue held it. I love the premise, so hopefully you continue working on it. Unless that would take your mind off of The Rose and the Thorn, and in which case...maybe I can wait for this... :) But seriously, the characters are already intriguing. His professional nonchalance and her view of him as a conquest. I can't wait to see how they go about their business. (No pun intended.) |
| AKA Chrissy 2007-05-10 ch 1, | abuseoh... this is a great hook.. lol i feel like a puppy begging for a bone, More please? |
| Lady R 2007-05-10 ch 1, | abuseGreat first chapter, the characters are really interesting, can't wait to see how this story unfolds. |
| Dezi E 2007-05-10 ch 1, | abuseHey. Sounds intriguing. Reads good. I'll be keeping tabs on this one for sures. |
| OMG it's WickedJelly 2007-05-10 ch 1, | abuseAh, am I ever intrigued... This was interesting but I spotted a handful of grammar mistakes. Perhaps you could find yourself a beta? |
| Empyreal Melody 2007-05-10 ch 1, | abuseOh, scandalous! I love it! |
| Ashelin 2007-05-10 ch 1, | abuseOk, immediatly putting this on story alert. You have me thoroughly intrigued. Please update soon. I have to figure this out! Great job, really pulled your reader in and we could immediatly identify with the character. More please! |