Hilarious and skillfully written! I love it.

That was crazy, unique, hilarious, and downright amazing. I absolutely loved it.

The tone was especially interesting--so light and nonchalant, but packed with beautiful eloquence. The main character was delightful and I very much enjoyed her reactions to things.

This work, for being collaboration, flowed very well, to the point where I couldn’t tell where the second writer began writing. And usually I am one to distinguish easily breaks in voice.

You both are extremely talented and will go far as writers. Seriously.

That was incredibly strange but infinitely entertaining. And well-written. Good job.

that was pretty amusing.

The woman in the sotry has definitly escaped from a nearby asylum. The ending sentence was great...actually the whole sotry was well written. Did you find it difficult to write a story with another person's help? Just curious, because I think that if you use ideas from more than one person, the sotry will be interesting, but the authors will argue. Sorry, I'm rambling. Again, good story, keep up the good work.
~neptuneshelly