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| Nemonus 2007-05-11 ch 1, | abuseI like how the first stanza defines paradise as perfection in specifics. It is, a bit, perfect trees. You tie in a unique Pandora pretty well and the poem's atmosphere is nice. Very optimistic, but acknowledging the "Hard" negative emotions. Pretty good. |
| catching-falling-stars 2007-05-10 ch 1, | abusei love it! it's so fitting with all the stuff that's been happening to the world lately. awesome job! |