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Nemonus
2007-05-11
ch 1,
abuseI like how the first stanza defines paradise as perfection in specifics. It is, a bit, perfect trees.

You tie in a unique Pandora pretty well and the poem's atmosphere is nice. Very optimistic, but acknowledging the "Hard" negative emotions. Pretty good.
catching-falling-stars
2007-05-10
ch 1,
abusei love it! it's so fitting with all the stuff that's been happening to the world lately. awesome job!
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