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| XxBlackChaosxX 2007-05-13 ch 1,  | abuseThis one seems a bit off, too, but I still like it. Hey--I'm going to make a c2 about poems and put you and your poems in it. Wanna? |
| thecolourgrey 2007-05-10 ch 1, | abuseThis poem is really good, but it could be better without all those reccuring spelling mistakes. It sort of detracts me from the flow of the poem. But correct that, and this poem could be fantastic. |
| PocoSnow15 2007-05-10 ch 1, | abuseOh wow! That was amazing! I loved the emotion in this. I've felt like this for the last couple of my months, and this is what my writing is starting to sound like. Beautiful, really well done! |