wow. impressive. It's perfect. Not a word out of place. Great job.

This is beautiful! Your word choice and line lengths are spot on. Just two things:
"dissapate" is spelled "dissipate", I'm fairly sure
"comraderie" is spelled "camaraderie"

But I love the contrast of snow and colors...and the rhyming words that get thrown in even though it's free verse. Very lovely.

Amazing. I usually quote the lines I like best but that would take forever in your case. I will say that I loved the alst stanza, the stanza about snow, and white, and "Let your eyes seer past the surface./It becomes a mass of colors,"

I love your poem. I like the part about the toroise/turtle and the line "the salt exhales". Keep up the good work.

~neptuneshelly

Wow, this is amazing! I absolutely love it! I especially like the
"It was a turtle, or maybe a tortoise--
(I've never been one for specifics)"
part. I'm not sure why. Maybe because it seems like unneccessary, unrelated nonsense, while at the same time it also seems incredibly important, like the poem wouldn't be the same without it.
I can't come up with anything constructive to say, there aren't any flaws I can see.
-Kiro