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| Twilight Starr 2007-11-22 ch 1,  | abuseGreat poem. Terrific job expressing your anger. Well done. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Eire Rain 2007-10-09 ch 1, | abuseWow! There is a lot of anger in here. Really smooth anger, though, which really adds to the poem. I liked the repetition of, "Don't forget". It's kind of a paradox, because I have a feeling that the person who this poem is aimed at would not forget to do these cruel things at all. So you just kind of drive the point home by saying that, in a really subtle and clever way. I like it. I hope this poem is not about a real person, because I don't want you to have to deal with that kind of treatment everyday. But if it is, I definitely see the anger being expressed. Poetry is a really good way to get things out of yourself isn't it? Actually, so is writing in general! There are things I've written that I would never, ever, ever say out loud. Okay. Bedtime for me. I haven't gotten enough sleep in ages! At least that's what it feels like. :) Talk to you soon! I'll try and read one of your stories in the next couple days. (and I won't force you to have drama like the other readers! lol) Carol Ann |
| tears-that-fall 2007-05-30 ch 1, | abuseok NOW i know you are way better at writing poems than me! :( i feel so alone |
| Master Shu 2007-05-25 ch 1, | abuseLove it. Painfuly true, I must add, they can be a headach. Trust me, I also deal with them in class. -As a sigh goes across the room- |
| Pocket Elf 2007-05-14 ch 1, | abuseNetta... that is wonderful! I love it, it makes me feel like I do at school with Keegan and Andy! You decribed how i felt that day Andy told me to shut up 4 no reason! Ur really good at this! |
| Wolven Dreams 2007-05-10 ch 1, | abuseThis is really awesome! You did an awesome job! One little stipulation though... You meant vile, not vial |