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| OtakuDolly 2008-03-20 ch 1,  | abuseadorable |
| Amopet4 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abuseAw. ^^ Cute and wonderful. |
| nonaccount 2007-12-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was simply adorable! You made Zebedee's (such a cutely awkward name - it fits him!) experience as a spider so laughingly realistic, or at least how I imagine it might go. :) "Could his many eyes have widened, alarm would have made them do so. Not this again! All he wanted was a cure, but people always assumed he was going to start flinging webs around or abducting babies." Haha! "Little did they know - he didn't even like children until they'd learned to clean up their own messes, and last time he'd tried to use his silk to build a shelter, he'd tied three his legs to a tree. It had taken him forever to get loose." I really liked this creative and original oneshot. Excellent. |
| Totally Raven 2007-05-19 ch 1, | abuseHehe, loved it. Seriously my dear, where do you get it from? Your talent is simply marvellous and the story line was ingenious. It reminded be of Hoodwinked, though ... with the whole "if you want to know the whole story read between the lines" type theory behind it. But anyway, another triumph. |
| Kailum 2007-05-13 ch 1, | abuseThat was adorably cute. Waoh I loved it so much. So so so so so much! I was totally hooked from the beginning with the nursery rhyme. This is such a cool idea! Slashifying nursery rhymes XD You should do MORE! Awesomely cute! I just can't get over its delightfulness ;-; |
| multiples of six 2007-05-13 ch 1, | abuseAww! That was so cute, and so funny. I love the tie-in with the nursery rhyme. I think you should definitely write more like it. =) |
| RavenclawDragon 2007-05-11 ch 1, | abuseThat was cute. ^_^ I read it this morning in school, and it made my morning happier and less depressing. You should definitely write more like it. =] ~Moose |