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| Casey Drake 2007-06-01 ch 1,  | abuseDefinitely a sweet little poem. heh. wish I could write decent poetry. The rhythms a little off at times but it's not too bad. :) CD |
| Hidden Sword of Truth 2007-05-12 ch 1, | abuseThis is such a beautiful poem. That is also sweet of you to write it for your sister. I am going to add it to my C2! Best Wishes! *TSP |
| RoxyFairy 2007-05-12 ch 1, | abuseAww. writen like a pro. i hope your sister liked it. who am i kidding? She'll love it! |
| Elicael, Fire Sarien 2007-05-11 ch 1, | abuse. . .I just realized I've been VERY lax in reviewing (haven't reviewed ANYTHING in a month+!), so be expecting a lot of reviews over the next few days. :P Anyways, this is such a cute poem. :) I could almost picture it. . .which is saying something for me, since I find it more difficult to picture poetry than prose, for some reason. Man, now I want to dream like that! :P At any rate, I envy your little sister. :P ;) I hope she really enjoys (enjoyed?) this! :) ~Elicael, Fire Sarien~ |
| Jenny Jakins 2007-05-11 ch 1, | abuseIt's very pretty and you painted the picture well. I also find it sweet that you wrote it for your little sister. |