I like the words you've used in this piece. I also like the style in which this was written. I especially like: "And I can't tell can't tell can't tell my own making nor see my own falling" Beautiful. Excellent work! Thanks for the review!

Wow... really nice poem...

beautiful poem. I loved it. 4.5 stars out of 5.:)

Nice type of style. Emphasizing the rain here.. it's really good! great work! :)

i quite liked the apostrophe use.
out of the typical character, but it fit somehow.
quite good.
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