Sad to say, fairly mediocre. This is kind of a common chant--none of the lines really stuck out that much from the whole slew of "anti-stereotype" poems. Cliche. To improve: images. Show us you really ARE unique.

Also, hint--don't put "for my Creative Writing portfolio" on the summary. 'Tis a turn-off. And it's not "preppie". It's "preppy."

Hope this helps.

~K

(Writing is the art of improvement, and tearing ones hear out while revising.)