whoah. harsh. love it.:D

Makes me think of girl power lol. YOU GO GIRL!

Wow...that was awesome. The way you wrote it was a little confusing at one part: who was the cheerleader? Anyway, that was really gorgeously written...sad, but wonderful. Great job! :)

Ahh, the classic hannah revenge...

My heart is aching for her... What's her name?

[Payback’s a bitch. And so was she.] LOVE THAT LINE!

hahahahahahaha. wo! I tryle ADORED this oneshot. It helped my bruised female ego from the previous oneshot about the girl crawling back.lol.

I really liked your story very intersting.

This was a good oneshot. I hate guys like that and I really would love to do something like that to a guy if one ever did that to me. Payback is a bitch. so is karma :(

ZOMG!! This is my absolute FAVORITE oneshot of all time. You genius you! :-)

that's definitely interesting! totally agree that payback is better then crying over something. there was this girl in my grade last yr who got me suspended for something i didn't do coz her mum wrote this letter to the school about me so, naturally, i keyed her mothers car for lying about me.

Anyway, great story! you're an awesome writer.

Another one shot.
You keep on amazing me ;)
I liked the story, but not the payback.
Why?
1. By doing almost the same thing, she lowered herself on the same level he is(and that is not good).
2. If you ask me it was to soft :D She is suppose to be a bitch, not a bitch in training :P
3. I do hope she was equaly mad at her TWIN sister! It takes two to tango.
__Tina__

Oh, this is perfect. I love it.

this should definitely be made into a series. not just a short story!

Deliciously evil, and painful. A swirl of not so vague emotions that is absolutely impossible to ignore. I loved it.