pain vividly portrayed.

i notice that you portray vivid images - a consistent factor in your poems, consider it your strength as a writer.

Ouch...but real.

well...it's useless to say that i was too lazy to sign in.

this is different. what made you write this?...maybe you shouldn't be at work so much...it gives you too much time to think. it sounds kind of like a plea to me. i did like the paper hearts idea tho...and also the glass tears; genius. did i spell that last word right?...i dunno...BIRFDAY CAKE! if it's any consolation...I luv you. 3

Small suggestion: Use capitalization and more punctuation.

Other than that small tidbit, I really like this. It definitely has merit.

I hope your heart can be put back together.

One word: AMAZING! That was so emotive and sad. You really are an excellent poet. And the theme of the poem's awesome too. Toodles!)