Neat way of writing this. I like the parallelism. Though your message is quite clear the style and the lilt keep it light, so it doesn't come across as a diatribe.

"You trust a must!" it is unclear to me what you are trying to say here.

"Loyalty pays in blood money, honey!"
Possible rewording of this line:
"Loyalty pays honey,
Pays in blood money"

You might have gone overboard on the exclamation points.

I like the ending. Throwing the little cliche in there is a nice way of tying it up.

This is very good.