peter pan,

it made me feel good when i found out

that you used to be played

by a girl.

your writing is so lovely.

just a question- why would you want to leave behind the cello? other than that, good job

I adore this.

This was pretty cool. Simple, in a way, and I like the end lines a bunch. The split heart line is good too. Nice job!

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it, and yeah, I'll keep working...