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| dawn's unforgiving darkness 2008-07-24 ch 10,  | abuseits getting really good |
| Status-Writing 2008-07-22 ch 10, | abuseI really like the plot to this story, so far. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Beautifully written! [ Status ] |
| Meeshell 2008-07-22 ch 10, | abuseI like the story. I'm not gonna lie. You have truly effortless transitions that I honestly envy. And I really like how Rynne isn't that typical cardboard cut-out innocent girl. The fact that Hayden can still take stupid but kind of legit reasons to think she's just like her mother proves that. And I also feel as if Fiona isn't all she's made out to be either. But that's another review all together. The only thing I'm a bit distraught about is how a smart guy (top of his class) Hayden would not only prejudge someone based on their mother but to even judge her mother so fouly when, well, it takes two to "tango"...so it's not JUST Fiona that should be given the blame for his family's distruction. It kind of makes me hate the guy. But then I remember that he's a story book character and I then hugely want to praise the writer that could make me believe, even for one second, that all of these people were real. Keep fooling me and post more. =) -M |
| JustAnotherLibroLover 2008-07-21 ch 10, | abusefinally seems like hayden's seeing the light! i want to eat that cake. it sounds yummers! anyhoo, good chapter, and can't wait for the next one! please update soon! |
| Abby 2008-07-21 ch 10, anon. | abuseI read the story, put it on my favorites and checked it EVERY DAY until you updated! I tell you what, I was SO happy when ya did! Good chapter, very interesting! |
| Night-Rayne 2008-07-21 ch 10, | abuseWell, I liked this chapter and I really can't wait for your next update! |
| CR7GIRL 2008-07-21 ch 10, | abusebut rynne is different **! |
| darkgurl92 2008-07-21 ch 10, | abusewhy cant he just believe that she's different.. ahh..update soon.. |
| DrenchedinWine 2008-07-21 ch 10, | abuseI'm really enjoying your story. Hayden seems so sweet and I'm happy for Rynne, but also really tense because I'm just waiting for the other shoe to drop. And I'm sure it'll drop hard. Please do continue! |
| Reminising Obsession 2008-07-20 ch 10, | abuseHayden!You dumbf*ck!GET THE F*CK OVER IT!Rynne has done nothing!So stop hating her!You know you just want to(adds naughty thoughts)her.Besides,Rynne is the perfect girl.She cooks, smart,has the perfect bod,pretty,considerate and is NOT A **,has major self esteem issues but thats clearing up...shes like a frikkin barbie...but more likeable and realistic...And also,what in the world does Haydens father's hamster eat.Steak!Jeez.But anyway lovin this so far cant wait for the update. |
| rainstains tarte 2008-07-20 ch 10, anon. | abuseahh, i love it. You have to update soon! -one of my favorite fics! |
| SuperCUTEJensen 2008-07-20 ch 10, | abuseyay your back...I love your story...I feel sorry for Rynne...I hope she will find out soon about Hayden and Paige cant wait for the next one |
| Daydreamer-angel 2008-07-20 ch 10, | abuseaww,what they are tryna to do to Rynne is awful, your story on the other hand is fab. I love it. its wow. original yet it still has the the classic cliches everyone loves. Can't wait for the next chapter. (FYI This is the longest review I have ever written) |
| abyssgirl 2008-07-20 ch 10, | abuseYou know, when I read bits like the two paragraphs right at the end, I get the feeling that one of the sub-genres ought to be changed to 'angst'. I feel sorry for Rynne... she doesn't deserve this. |
| Nefertiry 2008-07-20 ch 10, | abuseI remember this story... but... I forgot it so, I have to read from chapter one again. Just wanted to let you know that I hope you keep it up. I was sad when this just... went cold. |