wow, unique plotline!

this is definetely a new twist i ahvent seen before, creative i like it. but to emagine to really bee the town talk, it doenst have to bee the whore, jsut be the one that everybody abhore, scary. how old is she, hayden was the senior but is rynne a junior or senior?

im looking forward reading this story. and this hayden i hope rynne is a hard nut to crack, he deserves it!

OH. PLEASE write more! :)

Ok well I'm very much looking forward to seeing how this is going to work out. It sounds really interesting!

I can already tell I'm gonna like this story. I can't wait to read more! But I feel so bad for Rynne it's so sad that people actually treat people like that.

Idol, yeah right. Jackass is more like it. Stupid prick probably doesn't read the Bible or else he wouldn't be planning revenge. Honestly, you people and your need to fulfill fleshy temptations. And I don't mean that in a perverted way. It would serve him right if he actually falls for the poor girl.

Aw. I feel bad for her.

I like this a lot, I might soon come to love it. ]

WOw. I'm going to love this.

I like where this sotry is going. PLease let it be a happy ending. Oh i also love your other sttories to. Keep up the good work.

Mi

Looks really good! Can't wait for updates!

- Animeniac

Wow, it is rather intriguing isn't it. Aw, cute little baby. No no, it takes a rather serious, dramatic tone and it does promise an interesting story. The settings are fantastic. o-o ; Unless Rynne is sad on the inside and sticking her head high because she was trying to, erh, look at a bird on the ceiling or something. Damn, that has nothing to do with that either. x.x

Ohwell. It all translates to: Update soon! x3

I like the plot and I like where this is going, this should be an interesting story!

Hey! This sounds like a really cool story! I feel so sorry for Hartley (the daughter, anyway) about her mom...

Write on!

Just as part of my review, the chapter kind of ends strangely. It's kind of awkward, how Hayden goes, "Okay, so..." Especially with "he began". I think maybe you should go "here's the plan" after that? I know it's a little hackneyed, but when you cut off with "a confident smirk" it's abrupt.

Oh, I just felt like addressing that issue, it was kind of bothering me! Don't hate me...:3 Heh heh heh...

Yay! Another story from your brilliant mind! I'm so incredibly excited.

This is going to be spectacular. I mean, everything from you is, but I can tell that this is going to be an amazing story. Thank you for giving it to us!

Can't wait for more!

Wow! I'm in love with this story!

I can't really honestly think of any critiques. It seemed pretty nice, the grammer was good.

Do you understand how hard it is to please my nit-picky mind with word-choice? But you suceeded! Congratulations, you've formed an intriguing and dramatic story.

I can't honestly call this classy, but what would the world be without novels like this?

Keep up the nice work. I'm excited for the updates.

Emily