ah thats kinda sad that hes possessed.

very good, so does the neckles still steel peoples powers? more please.

sounds good, though rather sad that her dad died. maybe a little background about the necklace or magic in this time would be helpful

cute, cant wait to read more.

oh my god... kayla i loved it again and once more it made me cry

This was really good. You have a great writing talent, really! My only question is: what time period is this supposed to take place in? Because it seems like medieval times, but sometimes the way they talk is more present-time, such as, "My dad can sue you." The only confusing thing. Other than that, this was really good! Can't wait 'till the next chapter.