I like this story so far. It's very interesting-a few grammar errors but I love the plot so far and I like Regina's character.

Hmm, there are a few typos, like "she’s begin a turtle" which should probably be being, and I'm not so fond of the parentheses, but it's interesting.

A'course, then there's the counterargument: It's better to have loved once than to have never loved at all. I knew a girl who got married in her senior year at high school, went to NYU, transferred to ASU, overdosed on heroin, and died. In the span of just over a year.