 Narvuntien 2007-06-12 . chapter 1I can't bothered reviewing them one by one. I didn't read them all either I should be studying for my exams. I have much to say on the various subject but I shouldn't write about them here, it is so hard just not to go on about myself when I know my past and my histroy is really not that bad compared to most people I have met. oh the self centreness, I hate being related to my dad.
ok concentrate, reviewing. I don't like death metaphors they are so over used. I think only one of my songs has anything slightly related to death. but there is alot I could relate to here partically in this one. have you read unhappiness unjustified? I think that one you'd relate to.
oh I am still talking! I suggest either ignoring this or PMing I have alot to say. |
 flies.like.decay. 2007-05-17 . chapter 1Dude, I got a VW Beetle yesterday. It is swet. I'm trying to figure out what to name it. Yeah. My second father made me this cd, he's a DJ, except it was Modern Rock and I got assaulted with Avril Lavigne and Plain White Tee's and stuff. I gave it to my mom. She likes that kind of music. But he was singing to this one opera song I like. It was funny. Dude.. I got a black dad and a mexican dad. Woah. Yeah. So. Late review, I know. I wanted to tell somebody about my car but I've been trying to lend a helping hand to authors lately(leaving sections of the guidelines/definitions for them) and they get mad. Ha ha. Screw them. I keep thinking the title says Hidden Valley, like the ranch. I love that stuff. This reminds me of this girl, Nikki. She was always mad at everybody. And I loved her, but..he he. I use to get on chatrooms to yell at people and stuff. Then I sort of..calmed down a bit. But.. Lol. Yeah, whatever. This, I think, is one of your best poems. But I think in the one line you meant that is being a hypocrite and not that it. Hey. I do that all the time. It drives me insane. |
 Samurai Poet 2007-05-17 . chapter 1Yes, bullies everywhere should read this poem,
and quake in fear, of the fearless poet.
I really did like this poem. I can relate to it a lot. That's really all I can think to type right now. It's a nice work to mull over in your head and think about. So I think back on it later. |