good job. though, if i were Yami i would have destroyed the defenseless guardian once i got the jewel, and if i was Kuro, i would have punished Yami for turning his back on an enemy in the middle of battle. the story's still good though and brings up some interesting mysteries to be answered. update soon.

wow you updated pretty fast there. great chapter! loved it! update when you can.

I really like this story alot! It keeps getting better and better and I can't wait for your updates! I hope you will read my story too if you have the time.

This could be disasterous...I wonder what will happen next?

nice chapter. it was cute! loved it! update soon!

It was a very good chapter. I hope Anzu and the other find Mizu jewel.

DUN DUN DUN! well, this could be disastrous. good job. update soon. i hope yami gets a hold of the jewel.

This Review better show. For some strang reason my reviews wont show if I'm not loged in. this is my fourth time reviewing.
Anyway, This chapter was funny. I like the idea of them swiching placeses. Keep updating.

This was a lot of dialouge. You should try using more description of places, actions taking place and characters. Also, instead of Kimi says, Anzu shouts, try using words to describe them so it doesn't sound so repetitive. Like her comrad replied, or the girl shouted.

Other then that I have no helpful hints. Your story is very good, and I think I'll watch it for updates.

Perhaps you can read some of my works. I'd like that. I have a story up now called Sacfrice if you'd like to give me a review on it.

good job. same old same old review wise. it's getting interesting to have a friend who actually notices the secret. update soon.

this chapter was really cool! loved it! update when ya can!

I like this chapter. Friendship is always important. Can't wait until the next chapter.

good job again. element aliens' powers always seem to have some punishment for bad behavior, ne? always a mind of their own. anyway, update soon.

hahah serves her right. this chapter was funny. update real soon!

good chapter. very interesting. yeah i should be studying for my mythology test tomorrow but...i'll get to that later. anyway update when ya can!