Hm, clever. Very clever. I like it, keep up the good work.

I really enjoyed this piece of writing, as I enjoy the rest of your writing. The fact is that you portray a very real situation that if faced by children all around and lead the story through this scenario of being bullied and end it in a most ironic manner. Yes, school horrors seem very bad at the time, but as we proceed through life, are the horrors we face any less hard or harsh? Each one faced seems worse than the last and an ironic fact is that many adults often say that they wish for their childhood back, troubles, problems and all. Yes, our problems may seem bad, but I think that an underlying message comes out. A message, which I don't know if you meant to put it, but this message for me is that in life certain horrors seem to re-occur in different manners and that we should remember that while life seems tough now, the future will only hold tougher experiences in store for us that will make us wish for the past. The tough circumstances help to shape and mold us into the people we are today. A very good piece of writing that I really enjoyed.

Cheers
Lost in A World of Pain

Hilariously sad! I love it, it shows you face difficulty no matter how old you are.

Thanks for the review!

aw. this shows that bossing around will never really stop until you retire, or yeah...until you're old...
i like how you write a very short story with meaning, and it doesn't lag on and on..like someone i could mention..(me) lol!
oh...the horrorS!

really really interesting! i liked the ending ;)

Oh, wow that's depressing! True for many people though, sadly...

But the description of Andre and his 'gorillas' made me smile :)

Hmm...it was an okay start. I wish you could've continued it just a bit longer for something that would really grab the reader's attention. Other than that, your descriptions and narration are pretty good.

Keep writing!