I must admit, I am absolutely inlove with your story. I am also absolutley inlove with Dean! You know, as like, I think that he sounds awesome. Like, in an Edward Cullen from Twilight kinda way. But anyways, like I said before, I really like your story. It is hard for me to find a good quality story on here these days ince I am so busy. Your story is the first on my favorite's list and I am glad. I can't wait until you continue and update. So update soon. Please and thankyou.


Your Biggest Fan,
TennisChik12

Still loving this. I am so sorry for taking so long to review! Just know that I haven't forgotten your story :)

Hope to read more soon!

~Carm~

Amazing chapter. It made me laugh and smile. =] The narration was hilarious and flowed well. Terrific work.

~Twilight Starr

It makes me wonder a lot on what happened to her while she was unconscious. I hope to read more. I've loved this story through every chapter.

hahhahaha nice job dude. i laughed at the awkward moments wuite a bit. i def need more where this came from =] yayy!

OMG. amzing chap! awkward but just in the right way;) do we get to see more??

Yeah!! An update! Great chapter, but i wish Adrian would just "man up" and admit to Dean she's AT LEAST attracted to him!! Sheesh... that girl!! Don't leave us in suspense so long next time!! LOL :) Keep updating PLEASE!! :)

YES. Dude, this update actually distracted me enough from my deleria. Tristanlover11 - the bedside nurse who cures with words, not the sharp-pointy-objects-of-DEATH... er.

Dean can be my bedside aid anytime. Infact, it would make having a fever this high probably a bit more bearable. Probably? What am I typing? Hell YES that would make this fever better. Or worse, depending on the... cause. XD

Hmm, big chapter today. Yay =]

Adrian's cold, Dean's surprised. It's probably ninety degrees in there, and Adrian can't feel it... Possible vampire material? Happy am I when I am right... xD

The alien thingy was lulzy. I kept thinking about "Kountry Gentleman" when I read the description of "Hicktown USA".

Oh, intro (almost) of a new possibly sexy vampire... Heheh, it keeps getting better and better. =]

Er, I'll PM the rest of my thoughts if I can remember them... Actually, I should probably go to the ER with a fever this high. But I won't. I'll be doing homework instead (for once...)

~Dango

This story always manages to make me a happy happy person, with each and every update :) Great chapter. Can't wait for the next bit! And sorry I took so long to review!

~Carm~

omg! freaking amazing story and it stop just at the good part. please please PLEASE update soon. i just cant wait to see how this all ends up. especialy with adrian and dean;)

hey whats upp! okay so i am to lazy to email and dont know when ill talk to u so i was just stopping to say WRITE MORE!! haha yeah i seriously need something to read.. well i still have to read the truth about forever but yeah . haha finished impulse~ AMAZING gotta go. lyl

Her last remark made me laugh. :D Nice work. Keep writing!

~Twilight Starr~

Great job at the narration. I'm intrigued on what's going to happen to her. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

The story continues to have amusing narration. The somersault was cool. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

The part about joining Satan was funny. I wonder what will happen next. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~