Ah! This story is so intense. I lovelovelove it, but I can't decide if I like Matt or Marc more. Marc is so creepy. A little insane. But in a hot way. And Matt is so mature and he's all like "I have a job and make out with seventeen year olds." Once again, in a hot way.
Yeah.
Keep on keepin' on!
-Meghan

Aww... I feel so sorry for her. To have a day like that must suck...bad. lol. Intersting triangle you have here. lol
__kari

i like marc!!

Wow, never expected this. Amazing story. So many twists and turns. . . I know how Stella feels. It sucks. lol. Great job so far. lovin it.
__Kari

YAY! another chapter!

I really enjoyed it.

Except I was disappointed that she didn't hold her ground and show her anger. She's giving him all the control.

Yet..I guess that makes the story even better in a twisted way.

I'm loving the story.
Can't wait for the next update!!

:)

O.o lust takes over them till they lose control. . .both brother and sister. unexpected. lol. intersting.
__Kari [Karla]

I still can't figure out what's going to happen and then you leave me with a cliff hanger! How horrible of you! =]

I hope you update soon because I'm enjoying this story more and more!

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I just put up my new story!

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Keep up the awesome work!

Okay, every time I read about him/them, I can't breathe correctly. I don't think this is good. I might have to stop...No...I don't think I can...Oh well. If I die, you know why. ANYway...I love this story. Seriously. Stella is totally amazing and realistic. Well, and obsessive. But that is all fine and dandy. You HAVE to write more...EVEN though my life is on the line. I'll let you think about that.

Oliver

He's THIRTY FOUR! OMG I never thought he'd be that much older. Well great update!

**jaw drop**
THIRTY FOUR!
Holy mother of--shiznit. Daamn. . .
OK, I'm done. One major thing I like about this was that it. . . it doesn't focus on anything else rather than raw emotion and [almost] no lust. It's amazingly real and descriptive and. . .it's scary that you can write like that. AWESOME! I'm so in love with this story so far. . .
__Kari

I really like your choice of words and the way your story flows. It's not very choppy and it has just the right amount of mystery to have me waiting for the next chapter.

I can't wait to see where the story leads!

Update soon!

Great Start!! I love how you show Stella's feelings towards Matt. Is it a big gap between their age? hm I guess I'll just have to wait! x

Oh, wow. I really love this. The way you introduce the characters is very attractive and it's a pain to have to stop reading it. Your use of vocabulary and description makes you really feel what Stella is feeling, and I can really connect with that.

I applaud you. Please keep writing.

I don't remember reading his age, but then again, it wouldn't be part of the story. Kinda makes you wonder how old he is. lol. But, really, it must've taken a lotta work to make her feelings for him as intense it is. A lotta questions popped up into my mind, but I don't really think they were meant to be answered. lol. Great job on this.
__Kari