Love it! So cute!

great poem! Thefirst FictionPress I've read and I loved it!

I was confused at first about the 'my crazy heart, it wouldn't agree'. I thought you were saying that she said yes because she chose her head over her heart and that she did not love him. But the AN explained it.

man, I swear I checked out your profile when I saw your name first time in my story but then you didn't have any writing and today I checked again and voila, there're so many of them and they are really good!

I like this one. this could really make a good song. I love the rhyming.

I love this one too! It's so sweet. I love your poems they rhyme. I'm never good at rhyming. The story was just too cute. It made me swoon. I just absoltely loved it! Reading your two poems made my day after a long day of tennis practice. So kudos on that.

aw im so glad she said yes! good work!

swet!

u live romance don't u??

r u lonely?? do u have a boyfriend?? i bet that u think none of them understands u... i feel the same. one day it will get better! good job.

Wow, it's great & good, but not bad or horrible, and you don't need to hide in a corner.

I loved it, it had a nice flow and an excellent choice of words.

M a r k

i liked it. good job

Totally awsome. It does read like a poem- but I kinda get it as a story too. Totally cool.

It was definitely beyond Wow. hahah. I really liked it and love the whole I gotta confess; I just had to say yes thing going on. It was so sweet in the beginning, but the ending confused me a bit. If her crazy heart didn't listen to her, does that mean that she didn't really WANT to say yes, but did anyways? Well, anyway, I love the whole thing and it was enjoyable to read. keep up the good work!

Your funny! I honestly would have never thought of "go hide in a corner" for something I didn't like. That really made me laugh! :) Really good job! I liked it a lot, it was cute and it made me all smily!

i liked it.

i think you could use more imagery, to make the reader feel it more..

i don't know if i understood it all the way. is it talking about a girl who agrees to marry a man she doesn't love? maybe you could try to make the meaning more clear.

but keep up the good work =]