Wow, I really like your writing style. It's very crisp. Your character portrayal is really exciting too. I hope that this story eventually gets continued. I would really like to see the progressions of some of the relationship knots Liyla has gotten herself in to. I most anticipate this sibling thing but I love Rick's character. Not sure if I'm too fond of her chat friend, Eric, yet. Any plans for the nervous history teacher that thinks Liyla's staring at him? She definitely is a troubled girl, isn't she...

ah update! lol.

i've decided to write a review reading the first chapter of redux. i just wanted to say, im excited about this fic and that i read the previous and i liked it. well w/o further adieu... i shall begin reading the first chapter

oh wow.

after that long absense...thats it? well i hope u update again. the story is interestng. i read the first. i liked it a lot. it was unexpectd. but it was really cool. i like her relationships with people.

Oh snap. I did not see that coming!
I like this story alot although something tells me i should read the original if it's still up.
Can't wait until the next installment!

thank you. :)

Hahaha. Oh dude. That's funny. YES, I'm still reading! :D I haven't forgotten about this story! lol. I was so excited when I got the alert in my email too because it's been a while! But chyeah. We're all good now. :) Can't wait for the next chapter!

Okay, I read the other version of this story (LOVED, LOVED, LOVED it) and now I'm reading this one. I must say... I absolutely LOVE it Love it Love it Love it.

Anthony is amazing to me, for some strange reason or another, I love his character.

Liyla, I have things in common with her... (what I won't tell, smiles).

Continue please!

Oh yeah, did I mention, Poplocking Ninja, that I love Anthony?

i love this. update soon please.

update soon pls

EW happy, incest and masturbation. amen. ahahahha

You have no idea of how much I hate you right now. You can't cut it off on that part damn it! lol. But that'd be weird, kissing after you ate super spicy food. I bet that wouldn't test very good. Ha. Well, update soon!

As easy as it was to feel happy, she then felt sullen, and couldn’t interpret whether this new feeling was sadness, disappointment, or… “So, what do you think the U.N. will do about it if…”

Hahahahaa, rick interupting the narrator XD!

You did look pretty tense in class today, she thought to herself. Then her mind drifted to Mr. Bridenbach. He was fresh, young, conservative, no-nonsense, crisp, imperative, with an angular jaw line, oxford shirt and tie, more square at the shoulders with a serious frown and a messenger bag full of news articles. I wonder what he was like in high school. He was a young professor, but he looked agitated and constantly on the go, which made for some pretty interesting lectures and discussions. Liyla just couldn’t muster enough to keep herself engaged. It seemed that school—the building itself, and all the wraith-like shadows the trees made through the windows onto the hallways and lockers—made her even more impassive and complacent; she could hardly keep up with her studies. Probably the first effects of Senoritis.

Hahaahahahah Mr. Braudenbach! YEAH!

“Oh.”
He laughed affectionately as he swiped away at the corner of her mouth.
She paused.
He suddenly stopped laughing. His finger still trailed its way down her mouth.
They did not say a word.

WTF? BOMCHICAWOWOW

"time she madeit"

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“Car,” she said.”

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He was jolted out of his thoughts by the icy touch of her hand against his arm.
“Car,” she said.”
He had stepped off the curb to cross the street even as cars hurried past. He recoiled. “Sorry about that.”

HAHAAHAHHAA

"beneath her skirt or over his breasts"

"his breasts" should be "her breast"

man, that makeout scene came out of nowhere XD!