Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: Blind
vitriolicvertigo 2009-04-12 . chapter 1
Rarely does a story make me feel all fuzzy inside.
This one did.
cormorant 2008-06-15 . chapter 1
This was my face after reading this: ^.^
Bloodfeeder 2008-05-03 . chapter 1
:) it made me smile. Keep going!
i kiss to tell 2007-06-30 . chapter 1
so sweet! i loved it!! (just a stupid question but what is a 'oneword'...)
queen of catastrophe. 2007-06-17 . chapter 1
If you did that in a minute then you are my hero. I just use oneword to find a word to get inspired to.

Beautifully written as usual. I also like you can actually describe everything in small words.

Keep on writing.
-Mika
a silenced revolution 2007-06-13 . chapter 1
cute and sweet. I like it.
lackluster 2007-06-11 . chapter 1
the beginning almost had me set up for a heartbreak by the end, but my dear, you actually made me smile. it's sweet.
Icrome 2007-05-27 . chapter 1
aw very sweet, enjoyed it
smile persephone 2007-05-14 . chapter 1
Simple and sweet. Ah, the joys of femmeslashy love. You've made my day, my dear.
hazy scribbles 2007-05-14 . chapter 1
wonderful, as is all your work.

concise, meaningful, beautiful, i could go on and on... i like the contradictions of "that annoys you" to the eventual kiss on the lips. it gives this short story an extra little "oomph" to it. a funny sort of irony (i feel like that isn't quite the word, but it will do... for now).

never stop writing. my heart would utterly b.r.e.a.k.
Mona Lisa Smiles :) 2007-05-13 . chapter 1
This sucks.
hey maria 2007-05-13 . chapter 1
I always cheat on oneword, I take longer than a minute.
Return to Top