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| cormorant 2008-06-15 ch 1,  | abuseThis was my face after reading this: ^.^ |
| Bloodfeeder94 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuse:) it made me smile. Keep going! |
| i kiss to tell 2007-06-30 ch 1, | abuseso sweet! i loved it!! (just a stupid question but what is a 'oneword'...) |
| queen of catastrophe. 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuseIf you did that in a minute then you are my hero. I just use oneword to find a word to get inspired to. Beautifully written as usual. I also like you can actually describe everything in small words. Keep on writing. -Mika |
| perpetual questions 2007-06-13 ch 1, | abusecute and sweet. I like it. |
| lackluster 2007-06-11 ch 1, | abusethe beginning almost had me set up for a heartbreak by the end, but my dear, you actually made me smile. it's sweet. |
| Icrome 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abuseaw very sweet, enjoyed it |
| smile persephone 2007-05-14 ch 1, | abuseSimple and sweet. Ah, the joys of femmeslashy love. You've made my day, my dear. |
| hazy scribbles 2007-05-14 ch 1, | abusewonderful, as is all your work. concise, meaningful, beautiful, i could go on and on... i like the contradictions of "that annoys you" to the eventual kiss on the lips. it gives this short story an extra little "oomph" to it. a funny sort of irony (i feel like that isn't quite the word, but it will do... for now). never stop writing. my heart would utterly b.r.e.a.k. |
| Mona Lisa Smiles :) 2007-05-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis sucks. |
| hey maria 2007-05-13 ch 1, | abuseI always cheat on oneword, I take longer than a minute. |