|Reviews for Blind|
| DarkChasm-Sama 12/12/12 . chapter 1
This is WAY to short...why so short?
| pageleaf 3/12/11 . chapter 1
Wow. This is quite brilliant. It captures specific characters and emotions in such a short amount of words. I actually wouldn't mind reading this filled out into a longer story, but this is just amazing as it is.
| vitriolicvermilion 4/12/09 . chapter 1
Rarely does a story make me feel all fuzzy inside.
This one did.
| cormorant 6/15/08 . chapter 1
This was my face after reading this: .
| Subbie 5/3/08 . chapter 1
:) it made me smile. Keep going!
| i kiss to tell 6/30/07 . chapter 1
so sweet! i loved it! (just a stupid question but what is a 'oneword'...)
| centripetal forces 6/17/07 . chapter 1
If you did that in a minute then you are my hero. I just use oneword to find a word to get inspired to.
Beautifully written as usual. I also like you can actually describe everything in small words.
Keep on writing.
| a silenced revolution 6/13/07 . chapter 1
cute and sweet. I like it.
| lackluster 6/11/07 . chapter 1
the beginning almost had me set up for a heartbreak by the end, but my dear, you actually made me smile. it's sweet.
| Icrome 5/27/07 . chapter 1
aw very sweet, enjoyed it
| smile persephone 5/14/07 . chapter 1
Simple and sweet. Ah, the joys of femmeslashy love. You've made my day, my dear.
| hazy scribbles 5/14/07 . chapter 1
wonderful, as is all your work.
concise, meaningful, beautiful, i could go on and on... i like the contradictions of "that annoys you" to the eventual kiss on the lips. it gives this short story an extra little "oomph" to it. a funny sort of irony (i feel like that isn't quite the word, but it will do... for now).
never stop writing. my heart would utterly b.r.e.a.k.
| Mona Lisa Smiles 5/13/07 . chapter 1
| hey maria 5/13/07 . chapter 1
I always cheat on oneword, I take longer than a minute.