This is WAY to short...why so short?

Wow. This is quite brilliant. It captures specific characters and emotions in such a short amount of words. I actually wouldn't mind reading this filled out into a longer story, but this is just amazing as it is.

Rarely does a story make me feel all fuzzy inside.

This one did.

This was my face after reading this: .

:) it made me smile. Keep going!

so sweet! i loved it! (just a stupid question but what is a 'oneword'...)

If you did that in a minute then you are my hero. I just use oneword to find a word to get inspired to.

Beautifully written as usual. I also like you can actually describe everything in small words.

Keep on writing.

-Mika

cute and sweet. I like it.

the beginning almost had me set up for a heartbreak by the end, but my dear, you actually made me smile. it's sweet.

aw very sweet, enjoyed it

Simple and sweet. Ah, the joys of femmeslashy love. You've made my day, my dear.

wonderful, as is all your work.

concise, meaningful, beautiful, i could go on and on... i like the contradictions of "that annoys you" to the eventual kiss on the lips. it gives this short story an extra little "oomph" to it. a funny sort of irony (i feel like that isn't quite the word, but it will do... for now).

never stop writing. my heart would utterly b.r.e.a.k.

This sucks.

I always cheat on oneword, I take longer than a minute.