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Girlbrainiac 2007-05-23 . chapter 1
I love this piece. It is well-written and perfectly describes what it's like to get writer's block in the wee hours of the morning before a paper is due.

I especially like your "pushing a car uphill" metaphor.

Your phrasing immediately draws attention, and you vary your sentence structures effectively.

Good Job! This is a thouroughly enjoyable read.

Girlbrainiac
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