Reviews for www - FictionPress.com

Reviews For: www - Reviews: Page 1 of 2

abyssus 2008-07-22 ch 17,	abuseoh man D: I love how Nina is so nervous and such... it works quite well. and you don't need to apologize for the wait... it was well worth it. :D
JOysiej 2008-07-21 ch 17,	abuseI'm so sad it's over ;_; I was really looking forward to it
Kittyinjurface 2008-05-27 ch 16,	abuseman, that Davy is one sick **... I really like how you made Nina afraid and shy when she met Davy. I think I would be the same in such a situation, especially if I were so young. Gah, she needs to get out of there before she gets raped or something... this Davy is SUCH a creeper ew!
JOysiej 2008-05-26 ch 16,	abuseAt first, I was like; 'Yes, be a good girl, Nina, and take Victoria with you.' Then, I was like; 'OMG NO VICTORIA IS GOING TO LEAVE' Now, I'm like; 'AH, DAVY PERVERT DON"T NINA GO OUT OF THE CAR NOW' I'm not screaming at my screen, though. Should I consider this as something positive? Love this chapter, I hope it won't be over for a long time x3
abyssus 2008-05-17 ch 1,	abuseThis story has really struck home with me. When I was younger I used to be a lot like Nina. I was addicted to always being on the internet and became too mature way too fast. Luckily for me my parents couldn't pay for the internet for about a year, and that probably saved me. I am moved by your story. It's so true how dangerous the internet can be. I look forward to the next chapter. :D
Kittyinjurface 2008-05-17 ch 15,	abuse:D I got mentioned. Wow, this is getting really intense. I still can't believe she's 12. That poor thing, she just seems way to mature for her age, but not in a good way. She's just been exposed to too much :( I dunno, I feel in despair for her, like she'll never get out of this. It seems to me like this is much worse than face to face relationships, it seems much more dangerous. I want to punch Davy in the face for being such a creeper D:< Good luck with your writers block!
JOysiej 2008-05-17 ch 15,	abuseYay, another chapter's up! I read this chapter in, like... two minutes and five seconds? I totally adore it, although I get this urge to scream: 'No, don't go meet Davy, Nina! Please don't, you fool!' but I guess screaming at my computer screen won't change a thing.
Phish With Lemon 2008-05-08 ch 1,	abuseEver read Give A Boy A Gun? I'm reading that right now, and this format reminds me of it... They have a situation stated like this (only it's nonfiction), and they have the facts written at the bottom.
Kittyinjurface 2008-05-06 ch 14,	abuseoh wow, I'm really worried for Nina. I hope this Davy doesn't go out of her way to find her... I'm really really worried. She should've totally just clicked out of the window and just say "wtf are you doing? stop ** pretending,"
JOysiej 2008-05-05 ch 14,	abuseSometimes I wonder how people can let it go that far... but then again, I'm not the one to judge. Keep the good work up, I got very excited when I noticed you had added a new chapter ^^
Phish With Lemon 2008-04-18 ch 9,	abuseThe internet is a scary thing. Especially when in the hands of impressionable children.
Jazzeh 2008-04-15 ch 13,	abuseMy eyes were glued to the screen for those thirteen chapters ;) Add more, please. It is one of the best things I have ever read.
Kittyinjurface 2008-04-13 ch 12,	abuseOh wow, that's heart breaking. She never got to meet him, she never got to physically see him with her eyes. She only loved him behind a screen, and that must've caused an empty feeling in her. I'm sorry.
JOysiej 2008-04-13 ch 12,	abuseI can't believe you've only got six reviews, it's one of the best stories I've ever read- and I read a lot! The internet is indeed a very dangerous thing, I've got somewhat experience in that. When I was like eleven or twelve, I would go to chat rooms and stuff and talk to men who were old and perverted, but at that time I didn't care. Guess I needed some attention or something. Nowadays I tend to create a new email adress when I'm going to IM with someone I don't know. For a long time I've been RPing with some folks that were from my age, and I used my 'normal' email adress, but now I'm more cautious. The internet and all its beings can do crazy, scary stuff. If only people just discovering the internet would know this... Then they wouldn't do weird things.
Kittyinjurface 2008-04-12 ch 11,	abuseoh wow, this is really deep. I never got trapped in the world of internet so much that it became my life. I always managed to keep a personal life outside of it, even though I was absorbed in the online world. My experiences always consisted of theorizing on LOST and Heroes. I was into anime and roleplaying from the time I was in 7th grade till 8th grade. In 8th grade, I was introduced to sexual RPing, which flipped my life upside down. I remember my first time RPing, I was afraid to even virtually take off my clothes. I look back on it now, and it really tainted me, I would've liked my first time I was ever afraid to take off my clothes to be in real life. I've never really let it absorb me. I've had friends, and "boyfriends," online, but I never took any of them seriously. But this story really speaks to me. It's just so deep and powerful and really moving. I really really like it, because it's so true.

Return to Top