haha.. alright, alright, I pressed the review button. xD haha... anyway, as I said before, SO many hot guys. WOw, Kari must be one hell of a girl to have attracted so many guys. But as I recalled, there have been no distinctive description of each character's appearance, how do they look like?

Oh, and thank you for reviewing my story 'right behind you', this is not really a return review, but you can say that as that is how I have came across your profile =).

I love csah

I like this chapter as well, the conversations really flow. And I always have a trouble doing that. Anyway, it's really good and there are soo many hot guys. YUM.

I love cash

haha.. i really like the second or should I say first chapter. But you should leave a space between the full-stop and the next sentences, like this. See?
It will make the paragraphs easier to read =). Anyway, I really like this, will tune in for more.

I love cash

haha.. the A/N in your prologue made me laugh. Anyway, I really like the first chapter, you really grasped my attention. And I must say that your writing skills have really improved since the last time I saw one of your stories. Good job *thumbs up*

I love cash

well.
i would love to be her.
haha.
every guys after little old her.
:)
awesome job! i loved it!

Great Chapter! Keep up the good work. I hope more people check out this story too.

Giant Mutant Killer Chinchillas?I'm glad someone belives in us! We are very highly trained in the way of being able to be unseen!

NO! WHY DID YOU STOP THERE? Great chapter. Write again soon!

zack. i like zack. or jake.
haha.
uhm, chick is spelled with a k.
chic is sheek. like fashionable.
just wanted to get that out there.
AWESOME JOB!

OMG! I loved that chapter. It's longer and explained a lot more. :D Continue writin, as i keep reviewing. :)

haha.
i like it!
UPDATE.

Yes, your very evil cuz cliffhangers are the absolute worst! Who did she see?!
Well, It seems very interesting! Update soon!!

Um, author's notes are fine, but it might be nice if you combine all of them and put them in one block at the beginning or end of the chapter. Having them in the middle of your chapter is really distracting and makes it hard for the reader to "get in the story". Since this was so short, I have no idea what the plot is yet, but I'd like to read the next chapters you put up to find out.

Yes, the interruptions are annoying, but I'll forgive you if you write more. I added this story to my alert list so I can read more if you choose to add more.

Oh! Next chapter, I wanna see if the character is really random. I love randomness. And yes I hate the whole idea of waking up in the morning, I mean after all us people do need sleep you know. xD By the way I like shiny things too! XD now right the next chapter x] And I'll be like uber happy. Like way happy. =D