|Reviews for The Lone Wolf|
| a certain slant of light 1/24/08 . chapter 1
I love this. It's beautiful.
| DarkBlysse 8/8/07 . chapter 1
Marvelous, boss! Simply Mar-veh-lous! The repetition is quite welcomed here, as it doesn't seem the least bit overdone. One line did break the metre, though:
"In a fragile, frail voice"
simply because the second adjective was only a single syllable and all of the other ones in the poem, if I'm not mistaken, had two.