I think your poems are much better when you put two or more together, they help eachother and provide contrast that I can clearly see in this one. I love how you see informing people to be a "noble quest" it is both funny and serious...

-Peace out. (Review Marathon weekend! Link in profile.)

Nice word choice, you did a good job of showing what you mean by showing slightly different meanings of words (eg. get angry and anger). I also just noticed all of the titles and went back and reread everything and I like the titles a lot.

You did a good job of building this up and then ending it with staying on the couch. This is extremely relatable, good work.

I liked the usage of the word DOM! because it's just an amazing word. The last line of the last haiku is great, a little but of laziness and humor.

I like these, but I don't think you need the line breaks (or maybe I'm just picky). I like your sentence structure in the last one, it sums the whole thing up pretty well.

The first poem was a little confusing to me, I think there is something I am not getting. I like the second one, it uses sort of subtle humor and it made me laugh.

These poems work well together, sort of describing each other. I like the words "well...blissful" because it expresses how you don't really expect or understand it.

I like this one, it has a great sense of panic and not caring that much at the same time. Also, it just reminds me of my brother so much...

This is great at being negative and unhappy while not being awful and whiny. I like that you didn't use only single syllable words, so often people panic when they only have 17 syllables and use only simple words that they learned in preschool.

I like the second one better than the first, it had a very clear direction and was just...pretty (yes, pretty). In the first one, I think the last line is a little forced.

The meter of this does a great job of showing tiredness. This is a very relatable poem, good work.

This is sweet, but I wonder if the line break is really necessary. The messege is great here, but I feel it's just a little choppy.

This is amazing, I need it on a shirt. I like the onomatopoeia here, it is a good way to begin. The last line is good, it expresses annoyance, anger, and an attempt to humiliate someone.

I like the first line because it expresses an anger that EVERYONE feels. I also like the "(and horns)" part because it just...works.

I like it, this made me laugh. The meter of this haiku is really good. Yay! Review Marathon Weekend (link in my profile)!