Again, I really liked your writing. The way Emily seems so uncertain, and yet slightly disbelieving of what she thinks is right makes for a good plot, as I see it. And the whole thing with the professor; that I know I'm going to love.

I'm going to have to demand that you keep going with this.

Your writing is not only tasteful and interesting, it also has good rhythm and flow. The idea, though a little far-fetched in some places, is very easy to read, at least to me.