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| unshattered 2007-05-14 ch 1,  | abuseThis is really sad but I like the power in the words. |
| Disturbed Insomniac 2007-05-14 ch 1, | abuseI really like your choice of words... I can relate to this poem.. I usually feel this way with my father...keep it up:p |
| Gaki Toki 2007-05-14 ch 1, | abuseMom's have power, that's just how it is I guess. Interesting, intriguing, touching...true. Really. I never argued much with my mother but I'd argue with my older sister and then I'd have to disappear because she would find some way to blame me or scream at me without me even saying anything. She's mean to me. I'm mean to her. And then she tells me I don't love her--I wonder why. Nice poem. ~Gaki |
| Serason 2007-05-14 ch 1, | abuseI like this a lot. Its hard to describe why I like it, but I do. The words are just beautiful. Serason. |