This is fantastic. It's so strange, and I love strange things. I also think the ending of a story is the most important part, and I think you ended it perfectly. Well done!


Liz xx

I love this shot. It was real impressive. And I agree that you SHOULD make her speak more outrageously. Katya is a unique character. Now comes the criticism:
1. Not much description of Katya's feelings (it'd be good even if she spoke of her feelings out loud)
2. This story could use a little more humour
3. (related to No.1) can't relate with what Katya really feels
4. Not enough emotions portrayed (related to No.1 & 3)

But you did quite well. Keep it up! =)

Hi there! Great oneshot overall. The introduction of Katya's accident and condition was done extremely well. I can see Katya being a fantastic protagonist for a novella: she's got the brains and guts (or some semblance of them).

One thing that I was thrown off by:
"Katya tapped her bottom lip thoughtfully with the pop-top she’d broken off in the typical fashion—she discovered that her one true love’s first name started with a Y..."

Did you mean U instead of Y? Please get back to me with a clarification when you get the chance. I'm awfully curious as to whether I　missed something there.

-S

I am actually in love with this story. Katya is brilliant!

And the way you write her is so intruiging! You should think about continuing this into a group of short stories featuring Uther and Katya, you know, if the idea interests you. I know I'd love to read them :D

Great job :)

Aww I really love this story!

xx
Ali

Wow. I really enjoyed that :)

I loved the interaction between Katya and EVERYONE! even when you don't actually see it (aka. the therapist), and I enjoyed how you didn't feel the need to make her the most beautiful creature on the planet; which you tend to see a lot around here.

I would totally love to see a sequel to this. I'd like to see it continued into a multi-chaptered thing of beauty and awkward comments, but you've already "completed" it. So I will settle for a sequel. If you like.

Looking forward to your next story! :)
.bird

i love this! i love Uther and i love Katya...mostly i love Katya...she is hilarious...please, please write a sequel...and please don't edit it...it's muy perfecto as it is! simply wonderful...please write a sequel though

I really like this too.

great story. i actually you should write oone or 2 more chapters, just to wrap it up becuase i need to know more. her accident made her say everything she thinks of? and hes the cool guy? either way, this was a truly crazy fun story! fav story list!

I really like this... I would love it if it were made into a story, but only if you were to actually finish it. But anyway, you did a great job. It's well written and I was definately entertained.

I Like, I Lust, I Love!!

This is hilarious..and soo cute!lol

I don't really like the open ending (it's a bit confusing and most definitely hanging), but other than that, I like this. (I have no idea why I never reviewed this before; I *have* read it.) It's extremely entertaining, ahaha. I'm very glad xoxluurve added this to our c2. (:

hey there! I really like your characters and the story is well written. I like it how she is so outrageous and you have people actually react to that instead of just acting like everything is nice and dandy. I agree that her lines could use some more "audacity" I guess and it would be fun to have a little more on the sister's side too. Maybe a spin-off one shot? Haha! Good reading. =]

This was...interesting. Definitely unique.