beautiful imagery... the ending was very powerful.. awesome piece

Passionate yet sad. A wonderful poem that really gets to you, for lack of a better phrase.

amazing poem!! ^__^

D.Cxx

Sensual and sexual seen through the eyes of love, longing and loneliness. Excellent.

The descriptions are beautiful and then the shockingly sad ending is tear worthy.

After your last piece I thought I'd check this out. Moving sensual and suprising. An exquisite composition of words.