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| Dr34mer 2008-07-22 ch 2,  | abuseReally need to know what develops here! I don't like Kyle, just thought I'd make that clear. But I would like to see him pop up again somewhere... STILL love Pierce. It's so cute when he blushes. Such a sweet scenario. Obviously they're experiencing their first crushes but I didn't expect them to be 10. I thought they'd be older because of the way they act and speak. Please, please, please update soon! I've never really liked reading a story on FP but this ROCKS! You really know how to set the atmosphere :) |
| Dr34mer 2008-07-22 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE IT! People are such idiots for not reviewing! I've read both chapters before reviewing so this is my verdict for chapter 1: The officer really is annoying - unless he turns up later in the story doing something incredibly amazing (making assumptions and I know I shouldn't) I'm loving Pierce - he's a really nice character but I get the feeling there's more to him and I'm anxious to find out what. Noir seems the typical innocent girl so it'd be interesting to see how they both get on together. and I loved the ending the most - it was so sweet! Can't believe you didn't tell me you'd written this! |