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| Divisionred 2008-07-21 ch 3, anon. | abuseIt appears that the majority of the people in Aliana's life are a bunch of jerks. She has the roommate from hell. An overbearing sister and a fool for a brother in law. Now she is on the date from hell...what an idiot that guy is...my goodness can he be any more arrogant and stupid. Thanks |
| -YourShoesDon'tFit- 2007-11-13 ch 1,  | abusehey, uh 'memeber me? one of ur many ADORING readers who would L-O-V-E an update. I understand the life of a writer BUT nonetheless get your butt in the computer chair, grab a soda or something and get to typin'! urs truly, Patiently waitin'(I tend to lie a lot.) |
| readergirl1 2007-09-17 ch 3, | abuseAlmost missed the updates! |
| readergirl1 2007-08-24 ch 1, | abuseI agree with all the others. Great start please continue. |
| reallyinnocent2007 2007-08-08 ch 3, | abusei will review. because this story has a good start and i want to read more of it. so i hope u review again. |
| -YourShoesDon'tFit- 2007-07-30 ch 3, | abuseThank you muchly! LOL! When I saw that you reviewed my story i was like, "OH MY GOD! SHE NEEDS TO UPDATE...NOW!" I am really enjoying this and I'm very glad that she's not some prissy priss! UPDATE!! |
| Rory 2007-07-26 ch 3, anon. | abuseI think this story is off to a great start! I like the character of Alaine, because she seems like a strong, opinionated girl. I can't wait to see where the story goes. |
| stranger with your doorkey 2007-07-26 ch 3, | abuseyay!! i love updates. :) this review is a little belated, and for that i apologize. i must say i despise alexandr as much as alaine does. and i can't wait for her to bump into lucas! update soon! ~stranger |
| MarkedBYMelinda 2007-06-18 ch 1, | abuseGood! I really like how you derscribed things! |
| BabyPop Massacre 2007-06-10 ch 2, | abuseI feel "uncomfortable" about Gabrielle.I f I knew someone like her,I would possibly smack them in the face. This story has a rather humorous side to it and I like that. Update whenever possible! -LC |
| stranger with your doorkey 2007-06-08 ch 2, | abuseyay! i love quick updates!! ;) the condom thing was PRICELESS! i was busting up laughing...which doesn't happen very often. great job!! i can't wait to see how this goes!! ~stranger |
| stranger with your doorkey 2007-06-01 ch 1, | abusenot boring in the least!! it was quite an interesting beginning, actually. i love their confrontation - "do you often yell at the sky for raining?" update soon! ~stranger |
| DeLuvLee 2007-05-30 ch 1, | abuseactually, it was okay, you were introducing your main characters and setting the tone of the story. I hope you continue and update soon. Dee |
| xXxMoonlitexXx 2007-05-29 ch 1, | abuseit has great potential this story i can't wait to see what in store |