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StrawberryJell-O
2008-03-19
ch 3,
abuseadd oil

btw try the book city of bones its by an auhor who used to write harry potter fanfiction its not vampires but still supernatural

p.s. loving the characters
destroyed perfection
2008-01-20
ch 3, anon.
abusetoo lazy to sign in. add oil definitely! I love greek mythology in general, but Persephone/Hades is my favorite. I'm jumping for joy because this is a very interesting take on the myth. I wanted to do something skin to this but it never flew off the ground. I just read your Angst In My Pants story before this. Tis very good. Jules sounds very...deviant...perhaps...a turncoat of sorts. yes turncoat. anyway, keep on writing!
EmotionalTrauma
2008-01-19
ch 3,
abuseAdd oil! Eclipse rules, and umm... yeah... Most of my thoughts just evaporated. =D

-Biohazard, the review junkie.
EmotionalTrauma
2008-01-19
ch 2,
abuseGood chapter, although the Umbrella Song pesters me beyond belief... =D

Add oil,
Biohazard
Oooh.Look.A Cat
2007-08-15
ch 3,
abusethat was interesting
a new hottie
sigh
lol
can't wait for the next chapter :)

izzie
Birds and Boats
2007-08-15
ch 3,
abusei love your stories but sometimes i feel like i'm 10 again and attempting to read jane austen, meaning, i get the gist but some things just screw me up. If you catch my drift. I actually read the beginning of the first chapter, than stopped and promptly forgot about it until today when i got an update e-mail for chapter 3. I'm glad i read the rest, very very good. I'm also a huge fan of the star tattoos, that go by your eye, y'know, although i always saw them as a girl tattoo.
Carmel March
2007-08-14
ch 2,
abuseWonderful, wonderful story. I love this! You've got interesting, likable characters, a clever storyline, and a great style of writing. I can't wait for more :)

~Carm~
neon rainbow
2007-07-20
ch 2,
abuseSuper story, interesting idea. I like your style of writing. Update soon!
Seraphic Deviltry
2007-06-07
ch 2,
abuseHey, hey,
I like the way this story is starting out.
Probably has to do with the fact that I went though a major Greek mythology stage(obsession)about a year ago. Anyway it sounds really... is COOL the word I'm searching for? Yes probably.

P.S. Is Aria Kore?

-Seraphic Deviltry
FHJL88
2007-05-30
ch 2,
abuseThis a really good story!
Oooh.Look.A Cat
2007-05-21
ch 2,
abusenaw
so cute
i love gwen!!
so adorable
but ooh
his secret is revealed!!
and she finally has a job
now if only i can get a job as easily as she did!
lol
can't wait for more

izzie
Sekhra
2007-05-19
ch 2,
abuseYou are amazing.
It's unfair that you're so amazing.
Why can't I be as amazing as you? *sticks tongue out since the :P smiley is really unsatisfactory*

I love your details.
More information on Led/demons/Hades (the person and the place) to follow, I hope. You've got great style.
And Gwen is really a cutie pie hunny bunny snuggle munster whatever.
I speak a little Japanese, but I'm kind of low on endearments. 'hime-chan' would roughly translate to 'little princess', and 'iimoto' is 'little sister'. If you need it, 'nii-chan (or san)' is how Hayden would say 'big brother', and 'onii-san (or chan)' is how Gwen would say the same. Not that she can talk yet. But hey. Um... 'ai' is love. This isn't Japanese or greek, but I know that 'darling' in Urdu (it's a Middle Eastern language, I think specifically Pakistani, since I learned it from a Pakistani friend) is 'janni', alternatively spelled 'jani'. Maybe it would be a word that Aria knows. Have you ever noticed that 'would' has a really strange spelling? It should sound like 'whoa-la-duh'. But ANYWAY.
Add oil, though I've forgotten what exactly that means.
Thanks for writing.

--Sekhra
philipa1234
2007-05-19
ch 2,
abusereally good. excited for more.
Point Zero
2007-05-18
ch 2,
abuseOh! Awesome chap dude. I love the supernatural elements already.
Point Zero
2007-05-18
ch 1,
abuseAwesome start. I want to see where this is going...
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