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| StrawberryJell-O 2008-03-19 ch 3, | abuseadd oil btw try the book city of bones its by an auhor who used to write harry potter fanfiction its not vampires but still supernatural p.s. loving the characters |
| destroyed perfection 2008-01-20 ch 3, anon. | abusetoo lazy to sign in. add oil definitely! I love greek mythology in general, but Persephone/Hades is my favorite. I'm jumping for joy because this is a very interesting take on the myth. I wanted to do something skin to this but it never flew off the ground. I just read your Angst In My Pants story before this. Tis very good. Jules sounds very...deviant...perhaps...a turncoat of sorts. yes turncoat. anyway, keep on writing! |
| EmotionalTrauma 2008-01-19 ch 3, | abuseAdd oil! Eclipse rules, and umm... yeah... Most of my thoughts just evaporated. =D -Biohazard, the review junkie. |
| EmotionalTrauma 2008-01-19 ch 2, | abuseGood chapter, although the Umbrella Song pesters me beyond belief... =D Add oil, Biohazard |
| Oooh.Look.A Cat 2007-08-15 ch 3, | abusethat was interesting a new hottie sigh lol can't wait for the next chapter :) izzie |
| Birds and Boats 2007-08-15 ch 3, | abusei love your stories but sometimes i feel like i'm 10 again and attempting to read jane austen, meaning, i get the gist but some things just screw me up. If you catch my drift. I actually read the beginning of the first chapter, than stopped and promptly forgot about it until today when i got an update e-mail for chapter 3. I'm glad i read the rest, very very good. I'm also a huge fan of the star tattoos, that go by your eye, y'know, although i always saw them as a girl tattoo. |
| Carmel March 2007-08-14 ch 2, | abuseWonderful, wonderful story. I love this! You've got interesting, likable characters, a clever storyline, and a great style of writing. I can't wait for more :) ~Carm~ |
| neon rainbow 2007-07-20 ch 2, | abuseSuper story, interesting idea. I like your style of writing. Update soon! |
| Seraphic Deviltry 2007-06-07 ch 2, | abuseHey, hey, I like the way this story is starting out. Probably has to do with the fact that I went though a major Greek mythology stage(obsession)about a year ago. Anyway it sounds really... is COOL the word I'm searching for? Yes probably. P.S. Is Aria Kore? -Seraphic Deviltry |
| FHJL88 2007-05-30 ch 2, | abuseThis a really good story! |
| Oooh.Look.A Cat 2007-05-21 ch 2, | abusenaw so cute i love gwen!! so adorable but ooh his secret is revealed!! and she finally has a job now if only i can get a job as easily as she did! lol can't wait for more izzie |
| Sekhra 2007-05-19 ch 2, | abuseYou are amazing. It's unfair that you're so amazing. Why can't I be as amazing as you? *sticks tongue out since the :P smiley is really unsatisfactory* I love your details. More information on Led/demons/Hades (the person and the place) to follow, I hope. You've got great style. And Gwen is really a cutie pie hunny bunny snuggle munster whatever. I speak a little Japanese, but I'm kind of low on endearments. 'hime-chan' would roughly translate to 'little princess', and 'iimoto' is 'little sister'. If you need it, 'nii-chan (or san)' is how Hayden would say 'big brother', and 'onii-san (or chan)' is how Gwen would say the same. Not that she can talk yet. But hey. Um... 'ai' is love. This isn't Japanese or greek, but I know that 'darling' in Urdu (it's a Middle Eastern language, I think specifically Pakistani, since I learned it from a Pakistani friend) is 'janni', alternatively spelled 'jani'. Maybe it would be a word that Aria knows. Have you ever noticed that 'would' has a really strange spelling? It should sound like 'whoa-la-duh'. But ANYWAY. Add oil, though I've forgotten what exactly that means. Thanks for writing. --Sekhra |
| philipa1234 2007-05-19 ch 2, | abusereally good. excited for more. |
| Point Zero 2007-05-18 ch 2, | abuseOh! Awesome chap dude. I love the supernatural elements already. |
| Point Zero 2007-05-18 ch 1, | abuseAwesome start. I want to see where this is going... |