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Meeshell
2008-08-08
ch 2,
abuseI adore how all of your stories have such peculiar characters, and I mean that in the most positive way. I don't think I've ever read a story with a character even slightly similar to the main characters you create. It's amazing. I almost wish they were real. I have so much fun getting to know them in your stories.

And don't give up on this one. Think out of the box like I know you do so well. You have a good start, you can still take it ANYWHERE.

Looking forward to more!

-M.
Not Who I Look Like
2008-08-07
ch 2,
abuseomg, kissing b4 marriage, now that's just sad. : )
Kellybear
2008-08-06
ch 2,
abuseThis is very unusual, but very interesting, great. I like the concept of it. :) Can't wait for more.
bactrulus
2008-05-15
ch 2,
abuseThis is really funny! Please update soon!
smartalleck
2008-04-03
ch 2,
abusevery interesting thus far, great consept in my humble opinion. suggested ways for this puppy to go:
1. boys next in a similarly entertaining manner, met with failure
asks fabulous quirky friends for help, becomes group project, which could be fun, different viewpoints on similar kissing styles and so forth
have no idea how to find main focus romance guy, sorry.
2. advent of "theories" on kissing, could be tested, which would be fun, no main focus guy?
3. meets up with a similarly minded guy who will explore the straight man perspective of kissing code business, whilst our heroine continues on her quest for man-meat-based data
4. lots more of the same, involving a chapter per anecdote, after your initial testing process has been completed
thats all i got, sorry if this random babbling isn't helpful, best of luck!
Elle Winters 9
2008-03-31
ch 2,
abuseHHAHAHAH
funny!

good luck with this!
telepop
2008-03-20
ch 1, anon.
abuseOh but um... obviously you aren't slumping it for fans cause yeeahh. Um ignore that last bit. But this is good can't wait till you update anything of yours because it's funny. And awesome and creative. Okay done. Good job -thumbs up-
telepops
2008-03-08
ch 2, anon.
abuseWow this is very much a sap cliché. I'm sorry. I can just totally tell what going to exactly happen y'know? She meets a guy who is tall, handsome, and wickedly cool and badass. Somehow he starts liking her but she's all like "No way buddy, you don't fit the requirements" and he's like "No way babe I'm sticking to you like toilet paper on your favourite sneakers." Blah blah love and mush. You're so awesome story wise but if you're super stuck on what happens next in chapter three I can see why. There IS nothing left. You can't rush a romance. Look at Clown Girl by Monica Drake, you can't speed up the wonderful and miraculous process of greatness, it’s like a bullet train that totally hits you because you were leaning over the edge too much, it just happens out of nowhere. I don't have any super creative ideas because I have a very unimaginative brain, but try something with a ski lift or a really boring play. Those two seem original to me. But if that doesn't work, I tried, can you blame me? It's like 11 o clock right now, I’m sleepy. I hope you continue because you like to, because if you slump it for fans then it will just be like spilling you’re soup because you touched the bottom that was unbelievably hot, it never ends good. Good luck though I hope you can spark some ideas.
So yeah do it for fun and because it’s your passion. By the way I really, really enjoy reading “I Only Date Nerds”. It’s fantastic. Smiley face.
i.hate.usernames
2007-12-29
ch 2,
abuseAnother story you MUST UPDATE. I'm honestly in awe of how you come up with these storylines and ideas--they're refreshingly original and intriguing. And this chapter made me nearly cry with laughter. Genius.

If you're stuck for ideas, perhaps the next chapter could be the interviews with the guys? Anything to have you update. :)
peanutneko
2007-12-16
ch 2,
abuseI LOVED IT! Please update soon >.
The Cheerio
2007-11-30
ch 2,
abusehi there!

:]
So, i have to say, i will absolutely break down crying if you don't update soon.
Your story is that awsome-great-superb-amazing. And any other words like those. lol.
Day2Dreamer
2007-11-06
ch 2,
abuseHAHAHAHAHAHA!! oh boy, i figured, after reading "I only date nerds", that i'd see what else you'd written - and i haveta say, i'm in love with your new story too!! lol, it's an incredibly original idea - i love the way she looks at things so objectively and uses scientific language, and the way she takes notes on popular culture... and then there were all the interviews... hehehehe! especially with laura nicholson and megan schluicy - you managed to cover such different topics in the few people, it was incredible! i love your sense of humour, and i'm really looking forwards to the next chapter!! =)
Weirderest
2007-10-07
ch 2,
abuseOkay, wow, this is really very good. Its HILARIOS! I love Lenny, i think cheesy lips would be delicious! Ex is funny, can't wait for an update.
xxsuicide`
2007-09-23
ch 2, anon.
abusethis is realy god! please update soon!
SAKS
2007-08-19
ch 2,
abusewhat happened to u? i have been waiting for u to update for such a long time- for both I Only Date Nerds and The Requirements!
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