I think you wrote it beautifully. The story wasn't a happy one, that's for sure but you wrote it in such a way that it stings the heart. So well done.

This leaves me speechless, I applaud you on standing up for women and trying to shed light on domestic abuse and it's survivors. I think pieces is really well written and you've done a brilliant job portraying what it would be like for a woman in a situation beyond her control. Nice work!

Wow...I'm shuddering. That's so scary! But it was so well written...so scary...

I can't see how someone could be so cruel. Somehow, I understand her feelings, even though I haven't had a violent boyfriend myself. A very touching story that opens up innocent eyes that have see only goodness onto the more horrible part of the world that some don't know about as they are well-covered.

i liked it, and i think it would make a good long story.

Wickedness! I loved it. So, so, so heartbreaking beautiful!

That is so so so sad... I feel sorry for her. Anyway, pretty descriptive! I really liked it!

Wow. It's so pretty, especially the last line.

Is there any chance of you continuing with this and like, her escaping when she thinks she's pregnant? But then again, it would kind of break the spell, so maybe not.

I absolutely adore this story. I never understood why a woman could stay with such a man but I guess it's not for me to understand.

I must say you've described the feelings wonderfully. This is the life a friend of mine leads and it's scary to read this but it's the harsh reality and nobody can safe those women but they themselves.

Great story!

Wonderful work but way too many adjectives. You seem to try to shove as much as you possibly can into each sentence.

Wonderful work but way too many adjectives. You seem to try to shove as much as you possibly can into each sentence.

Wonderful work but way too many adjectives. You seem to try to shove as much as you possibly can into each sentence.

Wonderful work but way too many adjectives. You seem to try to shove as much as you possibly can into each sentence.

Wonderful work but way too many adjectives. You seem to try to shove as much as you possibly can into each sentence.

Wonderful work but way too many adjectives. You seem to try to shove as much as you possibly can into each sentence.