Reviews for if i could have the rising moon

D351 2008-06-03 ch 1,	abuseI'm definitely digging your somewhat disjointed, alternatively punctuated, and visually thin style... You seem to evoke far more than you describe in a jagged but elegant way. I rather envy your capacity for this...
t-t-t-ouch. 2007-10-28 ch 1,	abusebeautiful.
The Voluptuous Innocent 2007-06-04 ch 1,	abuseConcise, imaginative, modern. You do lovely work, keep on writing!
poetic abortion 2007-05-16 ch 1,	abuseI like the original title more. BUT, um, I like this. A lot. ♥ Also: The ending is made of awesome. - Noelle
DOORphrame 2007-05-15 ch 1,	abuseI love it. The format and the lack of punctuation do a really good job of conveying the feeling behind it. My only suggestion would be that the micro paragraphs be more connected with the rest of the poem because it is a stumbling spot in the flow.